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Michelle Richmond's avatar

This is a thoughtful piece, but I disagree with the conclusion that "those working in this venerable tradition of the artform of the future should have nothing really to fear from it." I started playing around with AI fiction with Chat GPT in late 2022 to see what it could do. The result was wooden and unimpressive. In recent months I've tried out other, newer AI tools. It's getting better, and it's moving fast. Stylistically, AI is capable of much more now than it was just two years ago. The more it is trained on fiction--and the more publishers like HC get in bed with AI companies--the more capable AI will become at generating nuanced fiction (or what appears to be nuanced fiction), sidelining the writers of original works of fiction.

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David Rose's avatar

Very interesting, Simon, and the ensuing debate. I have had some small experience with AI by participation in a university course being taken by a friend, which involved writers sending in to her a full story plus a two-sentence synopsis to be fed into the AI platform, the two versions of each story then being collated and submitted as course work. The resulting AI version was simply another synopsis, barely longer than the original synopsis; no trace of nuance, character or even plot. A point of interest noted by the person taking the course was that all the endings of the AI versions were uniformly upbeat, uplifting - 'positive'.

I accept that there has been improvements since then, but I'm curious - and sceptical - as to how AI handles irony - a key component, as you say, in anti-novels; would it even recognize that gap, or slippage?

Another test.

Prompted by your coverage in your book of Calvino's essay (available, incidentally, in Picador's paperback essay collection entitled The Literature Machine 1989), I have just reread it after many years. His counter-example was what struck me in my original reading and still does. It hinges on puns, more specifically those which embody significance, as humour or unexpected insight. AI or any combinatorial system, can generate puns ad nauseam; could it spot the jokes?

Calvino thinks not - those hidden insights thrown up when 'things click into place' have significance only to 'the ghosts' - Ryle's 'ghosts in the machine', i.e. human consciousness.

By coincidence, the current issue of the TLS has a review of a biography of Roger Penrose. In it, the reviewer mentions Penrose's argument around consciousness, viz. that it cannot be computational. His argument/insight stems from Godel's Incompleteness Theorem: that in any consistent formal system, 'there is a sentence in the language of that system - one that says effectively "I am not provable" - that is true but not provable in the system. Since you and I can recognize the truth of such a sentence, Penrose argues, it follows that consciousness can't be computational...'

That same argument applies to AI.

So, AI as a diagnostic tool - exposing the cliches and conventionalities - fine. There are already too many humanly-authored novels published (and reviewed) that might just as well have been AI-generated. Maybe the use of AI to weed those out will allow more genuinely experimental, innovative works, more anti-novels even, to be published - and reviewed.

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